Epico! I thought you did pretty decent at actually mixing these parts together, and I actually enjoyed listening to it. I'm just a bit skeptical at the end bit and wondering if it's necessary to be there since the end bit seems a bit excluded from the whole track. If your music has lore in it, I think it moght work, but for average listeners the transition kinda sounded like the song transitioned to the next song.
But overall, I enjoyed the song and I think you did a pretty good job!