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Epico! I thought you did pretty decent at actually mixing these parts together, and I actually enjoyed listening to it. I'm just a bit skeptical at the end bit and wondering if it's necessary to be there since the end bit seems a bit excluded from the whole track. If your music has lore in it, I think it moght work, but for average listeners the transition kinda sounded like the song transitioned to the next song.
But overall, I enjoyed the song and I think you did a pretty good job!
Thank you for your kind words!!
Yeah, I was a bit divided on the ending too, half of the time I really loved it and half of the time I didn't. I made a radio edit for spotify and other streaming services without the ending, to make sure that it didn't actively disuade anyone from putting it in a playlist or smth. It has nothing to do with lore though lol, im too dumb to think of stories for music. All that matters are the vibes :p
Thank you once again for your review!
Following your dreams are never a waste of time. Now I hope you do not turn it into a waste by deciding to stop. This track is pretty cool! I believe the things we do becomes great when it means a lot to us and I felt it on this one. Keep it up! :D I also wish you the best for things to work out better for your dreams.
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